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Saturday, May 10, 2014

Alternative 3rd Person Opening to Web Series.

EPISODE ONE: ORIGINS
            The pair of them laid together so that their intertwined limbs were hard to differentiate.   It had been a dreadfully smoldering afternoon in mid-July and they were uncovered underneath a whirling ceiling fan.   There was no one else about them, so that they could only hear the labored breaths that came after an impromptu round of rigorous sex.   Clive breathed Allison in and pressed his nose into the nape of her neck with a sharp inhale.   Her creamy soft skin was comfortable enough for him to lay in for the rest of eternity.    If he had had the choice of how he’d die, he knew that he would want it in this place, with this women, in this position.   She let out a slight moan, and reached her lips to his, and after a few wet pecks she brought her eyes open to his.  
“Hello.”  She said.   And he responded just the same.
“You aren’t ready for another round are you?”  Clive asked her.   In truth he was hoping she would say no, for he wasn’t sure if he had the strength to go again.  
She said, “Maybe.”  Letting out a small but faint bit of laughter.  She pressed her body into his a little more.   Clive loved the way her smile couldn’t be hidden, there was always a trace of a grin in the curve of her mouth.   In the lines against her cheek and brightness of her eyes he felt a soothing hope that he never felt anywhere else.   This embrace would have been enough for his lifetime, but the saddest part about it was that it would of course have to come to end.  He squeezed her tighter, his open palm against the small of her back so that her spine moved his fingertips like a wave as she shifted herself again.

Then her expression changed as her eyes looked back into her mind for a way to phrase her next words.   He saw the expression before, and it frightened him.   It had been awhile since he’d seen it and he had begun to think her non-erasable grin was going to remain but unlike what his imagination had hoped for, she was now thinking with deep concern.    “What do you love more?”  She finally said.

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